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Clueless

Journal Entry: Tue Mar 5, 2013, 4:49 PM


Everyday I wake,

Is only for your sake,

Though I am sure what I desire,

Is not what you admire,

 

There's too much pain,

And not enough gain,

I don't have enough sight,

To continue my might,

 

I'm just a boy,

Who's constantly used as a toy,

My only fear,

Is to lose the few I hold dear,

 

I attempted a few,

But admit I couldn't follow through,

I think I have a reason,

For she has shown me no treason,

 

She has no clue,

Of the things she can do,

Her smile is so bright,

Always my light,

 

I have stood my ground,

Just to hear her sound,

I will get up again,

To fight against this sin.



Inspired by *Zivera and ~OutlawTwitch.

Do not steal, copy, recreate, or use in any way without my written permission.
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palefire12 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that is beautiful.
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Zivera Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank You.
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palefire12 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.
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Darknight216 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
It make me sad :C
xD
I love it the rhyming sends me somewhere else I didn't see I had before :3
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Zivera Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad you liked.
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Shadowed-DarkNinja Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaw ;n; very nice! love how its written~
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Zivera Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you~ <3
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Shadowed-DarkNinja Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome ^____^
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Percese Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Aw ;o, That's really good, nicely written c8
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Zivera Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
x3 Thank you.
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